To show my imagination, I created a portrait of what my life might be like in the future. Here I am presenting it to the class: My feedback:
Emma: I liked your picture. I liked your hair. I wish you drew more. Frankie: I liked the eyes, the sun and Arwyn. I wish the eyes were normal. Shotaro: I liked the picture. And the drawing. I wish you had drawn the beach. Emanie: I liked the hair and the dress. I liked dresses. Aubrey: It was good. I liked it. I wish you had told how old you are (in the picture). Minzhe: I liked her dress. I liked the picture. I wish she sang. Siena: I loved your drawing. I liked how you wrote your presentation on the back of your paper. I wish you gave more information about her. Lucy: I liked the hair. I loved your lips. I think you should work on the background. Pieter: I liked the picture. I liked the show/presentation. I wish you could make it longer. Griff: I think she used her imagination because she thought about what she will look like in the future. I wish she had made things that were more than just how she would look in the future. Nora: I loved the writing. She really showed her imagination. I wish she did more writing. Adam: I liked the story. I liked her face. I wish it was a bit longer. Teddy: She is a great drawer. You write a lot of words. I wish it was longer. Claire: I liked the hair. I liked the high heels. I wish you had put in a dog. Arwyn: I like my long hair with pink stripes. I like my pink heels. I wish I had more ideas.
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